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Thank you once again! +REP for your work(once more). You really giving our suggestions like a paid freelancer would give if asked from platforms like Fiverr,etc. But you did it for FREE! Thanks once again.

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Sorry to be too much greedy. But can you please do it for shadownethost.com(cuz thats my prime focus ). If not, it's okay. You've already helped me alot.

Once again, and starting from the top!

You get extra marks for the immediacy of your response time to the chat. It said you were offline and I'm not sure if that's intentional, but your response time was fantastic.

Moving on...

See this image:

http://pix.toile-libre.org/upload/origin...254357.png

Firefox, latest version, OS is Linux. I have no idea what that is supposed to be, but it's an error in my view. So, you may wish to fix that. Seeing a glaring error like that is an immediate turnoff. It makes me doubt the professionalism of the company.

Moving on...

"Best Virtual Service
Web & WordPress Hosting"

Consider changing to:

"Best Virtual Serivces;
Including Web and WordPress hosting!"

Moving on...

See this image:

http://pix.toile-libre.org/upload/origin...254675.png

Again, there's that "unknown character" or faulty image. That's seemingly an error. If it isn't an error then, to be honest, it's a horrible design choice! I'm going to assume it's an error, because your design is pretty good.

(You said this site was your focus, so I'm going to be extra rough/careful with this one. I am going to be picky!)

"Free Domain on Yearly plan"

Change to:

"Free domain name with yearly plan!"

Add exclamation points to the rest of those four items. They are benefits.

In that same section...

"Awesome customer support"

The word "awesome" is a bad choice. You want professionalism.

"Industry leading customer support!"

Moving on...

"Our web hosting plans with wordpress hosting available includes easy setup, automated updates and backups, 100%
network uptime with a very high bandwidth limitations which will never end and 24/7 email/ticket support. Use any
WordPress theme or plugin you want. Starting at $2.95/mo"

You're going to try to avoid using exact same phrases - UNLESS you want them to stand out. You also don't want to use "limitations." That's a negative. Avoid that.

"Our generous hosting plans come with easy setup, easy configuration, and include point-and-click WordPress! With our hosting, you can use any WordPress theme or plugins! Our 100% uptime, with exceptional bandwidth allocations will ensure your business is available at all times and from all locations across the globe. Our knowledgeable staff is available to help you 24 hours a day. You can contact us by email, ticket system, and even with chat!"

That looks better to my eyes and it gets rid of that word "limitations." You never imply limits as anything but a benefit. It's a negative word.

Also never, ever use the word "cheap." Never use it. Instead, it's "inexpensive" or "affordable." Use anything but "cheap."

(Not that you did, but that it's a good solid piece of sales advice and other people may be reading this.)

Next...

Your package names... They are all metals until you get to "enterprise." Those things don't go together.

Maybe something like Bronze, Silver, Gold, Platinum? That's up to you, but I'd seriously recommend making the four items at least have the same subject/connotations. Going from three metals to "enterprise" just looks like you didn't give it much thought.

Next...

"Planning to start a web hosting company? Well, our plans are best for you! With top-notch uptime, you can't
go wrong! Now with Free Unlimited SSL Certificates! Starting at $4.5/mo"

"Would you like to earn money reselling web hosting? Our reseller plans are the best in the business. With our uptime and round-the-clock support, you can't go wrong? We'll even throw in unlimited SSL Certificates and our plans start at only $4.50 per month!"

You also have 100% in there - and 99.99% later. I'd say leave the first one vague (as all hosting companies offer similar - even if they don't provide it.

(Also... It's up to you, if you want to use $4.5 - but it's traditional in most English speaking countries to include the extra decimal point. So, I wrote it as $4.50. You also used $4.50 elsewhere, and being consistent is a good idea.)

Alright...

We gotta talk about those names for your reseller accounts.

Little Boy and Fat Man? Those are the names of the atom bombs that the US dropped on Japan near the end of World War II. That's a horrible idea! LOL No! You almost certainly want to change those!

How about something like:

Starter Plan, Medium Plan, Large Plan, Enterprise Plan

Those aren't bad, but I highly, highly recommend changing the existing titles!

Next...

"Affordable pricing for you

We have powerful products which can help you for managing your digital services.
Start your journey by selecting one of our products and get promising and secure system for
your digital products and services."

Change to:

"AFFORDABLE PRICING!

We have premier products that can assist you in managing all of your digital services. Start your business upgrade by selecting one of our packages and get started on the road to digital success! We take service and support as seriously as you do."

Again, I had to change the verbiage, but the intent is expressed a bit better. You're capitalizing on their emotions at that point. You're saying you take their customers as seriously as they take their customers.

Next!

"With our clustered network around the world, you can't go wrong."

Maybe try rewording that?

"With our clustered, world-wide, network of servers, you can't go wrong."

Next!

"Our load balanced network will never disappoint you. If one server fails, another will take place."

Maybe:

"Our load-balanced network will not disappoint. If one server fails, another takes its place - keeping your business online and ready when your customers need you."

Next...

"From creation of website, to website builder and from database to website scanner, we have everything you need."

That's kind of gibberish.

"From creation of a website with a free website builder, to all the databases your company needs, we cover all your business needs."

Next...

"You can monitor your website will our easy-to-monitor logs system. Form 400 to 1000, all errors are logged when accessed."

Change to:

"You can monitor your services with our easy to use logging system. Know when errors happen and know how to fix them."

Next...

"With our softaculous support, you can install any of the most popular or the least applications easily with just one click!"

"With Softaculous, you can instantly install any of the most popular applications, keep backups, and automatically update them to ensure you have the latest features and the best available security."

I took some artistic leeway with that one.

Next...

"Our DDoS protected, highly secured network will not let you get your website hacked in any manner. Our server firewall is always online!"

"Our highly secured network will keep you safe from hacking. Our server's firewalls are always online and protecting you from DDoS and other attacks."

"Use the coupon "NEW10" to avail your 10% discount on any of Shared Hosting.
Get super speed for your website. Get started from $2.95/mo."

Hmm...

"Use coupon code "NEW10" to get 10% off any shared hosting plan. Get started for just $2.95 per month!"

I'd drop most of that last line entirely. It just reads awkwardly.

Finally!!!

"We have powerful products which can help you for managing your digital services. Start your journey by selecting
one of our products and get promising and secure system for your digital products and services."

That's a little tougher.

"We have a powerful infrastructure that helps you manage all your digital needs. Your first step to business success is selecting the package that best suits your needs. You can rely on our promises and security to ensure your business growth and reputation."

I like that better and it says the same thing, but it emphasizes the benefit. You are telling them WHY they should choose you. How those features will benefit them is important. It's not just a list of features - it's "Why do I even care about these features?"

It's also important to remember that not all customers are going to be technologically minded, so make sure that they know what the jargon does for them.

Anyhow, I'd start there!

Also, this one took a while. So, I'm done with this for now! If you have other sites, they'll have to wait for another day.