[KGIII]

Hello! I hope this doesn't seem impolite - it's actually me looking to do something constructive today. I'm pretty bored. I'm going to try to give you some constructive feedback, which is what you asked for.

I took a look at your site and there could be some improvements in the verbiage. Your English isn't as clear and precise as it could be. There are also some pretty basic errors.

I have a little free time today. So, I'm going to *offer* to improve your grammar. (You don't have to listen to me!)

Let's begin, shall we?

Starting at the top and working my way down (just on the front page).

"Get best speed for your website. Dont loose more clients."

Change to:

"Get the best speed for your website. Don't lose more clients."

(Loose is like a loose shoelace. Lose is what you do when you lost a client! Also, the apostrophe and "the" make it more readable.)

"Our highly clustered server with 100% SLA uptime won't get you go wrong!"

Change to:

"Our highly clustered server, with 100% SLA uptime guarantee, means you can't go wrong!"

"From automated billing to easy and user friendly based panels, we've got all for you!"

Change to:

"From automated billing to easy and user friendly control panels, we've got it all for you!"

"Got some questions? Sure! Put them up in a ticket or contact our live chat agent anytime!"

Change to:

"Have any questions? Open a support ticket or contact our live chat agent anytime."

(I'd drop the "Sure!" entirely, as it just doesn't make much sense.)

Now, the next part gets a little tricky. I'm not precisely sure what they're doing - so I am going to have to make a few assumptions.

"We're setting up our infrastructure, so dedicated servers are coming soon!"

Change to:

"We're currently experiencing growth! Dedicated servers are coming soon!"

That's a more positive statement and instills confidence in the reader.

"We just started, right? Hold on for a few more moments! Sooner you'll be able to resell our service and earn money!"

Change to:

"We're changing the dynamics of hosting! Sign up or inquire now to resell our services and start your own moneymaking business!"

Again, more positive - and it invites contact with the company. If the services aren't ready, they can at least be placed on a mailing list and be informed when the reseller services do become available.

"Highly protected anti-ddos network which doesn't oversell customers on a single server! That is, you're free from SPAM!"

"Our anti-DDoS network doesn't oversell to our customers! You get the resources you pay for!"

(I'd completely drop the bit about SPAM, as that's not really related and doesn't have anything to do with it.)

"OpenVZ Based Kernel with OVH Powered Network hosted VPS Servers! Yes, its true!"

Did you really want to tell them that it's OVH? You're inviting them to just go to OVH and sign up there?

"Our OpenVZ virtual private servers are top notch, exceed industry standards, and are AFFORDABLE!"

(I'm not sure about that one, but that reads better.)

"Why you need a HOSTING?"

Change to:

"Why should you choose Pulchie Hosting?"

"Get More Reach!

"A business without it's existence on Internet is a business that will soon be out of business" - Bill Gates"

Change to:

"Every business, no matter how small, needs to be online!

"A business without it's existence on the Internet is a business that will soon be out of business" - Bill Gates of Microsoft"

"Powerful Security

Security? Meh, we've got it! Our partnered company "

That doesn't make a whole lot of sense as it is. Let's try to fix it a little bit.

"We exceed industry standards when it comes to security!

Our premier anti-DDoS and other security ensure your site remains online and safe from hackers! We partner with the best in the industry and we take your security very personal!"

"Market Performance

Yes, you heard it right! We do marketing too. Contact our marketing team to get a quotation."

Change to:

"Market Performance!

We want you to succeed as much as you want success. If you need help marketing and increasing awareness of your brand, contact our marketing team to get a quote!"

There!

I hope that helps? I'm a native English speaker and a writer. So, I figured I'd try to help. It will not hurt my feelings if you completely ignore this. However, I think that will make the site read better to English speakers. I didn't dig into the internal pages, as I don't really have that much initiative!

Best of luck.