[Manal]

This domain is not authorized to use whmcs..
Are you accepting nulled softwares on your hosting?

Not anymore bro
As @tiwil mentioned above, you can see the screenshot that it is authorized.
It was a time when I once was use to use nulled WHMCS but it's all good now

[youssefbasha]

Not anymore bro
As @tiwil mentioned above, you can see the screenshot that it is authorized.
It was a time when I once was use to use nulled WHMCS but it's all good now

that guy paid for the whmcs license or u are giving licenses for free with the hosting ?xD

[xdude]

Quite nice looking design indeed. Which CMS or Grid layout system did you use for building it ? Loads quite fast too.

[Manal]

Quite nice looking design indeed. Which CMS or Grid layout system did you use for building it ? Loads quite fast too.

No CMS. It's all about a downloaded theme and customized according to the website's owner needs + few hosting features to make it load fast.

[KGIII]

Hello! I hope this doesn't seem impolite - it's actually me looking to do something constructive today. I'm pretty bored. I'm going to try to give you some constructive feedback, which is what you asked for.

I took a look at your site and there could be some improvements in the verbiage. Your English isn't as clear and precise as it could be. There are also some pretty basic errors.

I have a little free time today. So, I'm going to *offer* to improve your grammar. (You don't have to listen to me!)

Let's begin, shall we?

Starting at the top and working my way down (just on the front page).

"Get best speed for your website. Dont loose more clients."

Change to:

"Get the best speed for your website. Don't lose more clients."

(Loose is like a loose shoelace. Lose is what you do when you lost a client! Also, the apostrophe and "the" make it more readable.)

"Our highly clustered server with 100% SLA uptime won't get you go wrong!"

Change to:

"Our highly clustered server, with 100% SLA uptime guarantee, means you can't go wrong!"

"From automated billing to easy and user friendly based panels, we've got all for you!"

Change to:

"From automated billing to easy and user friendly control panels, we've got it all for you!"

"Got some questions? Sure! Put them up in a ticket or contact our live chat agent anytime!"

Change to:

"Have any questions? Open a support ticket or contact our live chat agent anytime."

(I'd drop the "Sure!" entirely, as it just doesn't make much sense.)

Now, the next part gets a little tricky. I'm not precisely sure what they're doing - so I am going to have to make a few assumptions.

"We're setting up our infrastructure, so dedicated servers are coming soon!"

Change to:

"We're currently experiencing growth! Dedicated servers are coming soon!"

That's a more positive statement and instills confidence in the reader.

"We just started, right? Hold on for a few more moments! Sooner you'll be able to resell our service and earn money!"

Change to:

"We're changing the dynamics of hosting! Sign up or inquire now to resell our services and start your own moneymaking business!"

Again, more positive - and it invites contact with the company. If the services aren't ready, they can at least be placed on a mailing list and be informed when the reseller services do become available.

"Highly protected anti-ddos network which doesn't oversell customers on a single server! That is, you're free from SPAM!"

"Our anti-DDoS network doesn't oversell to our customers! You get the resources you pay for!"

(I'd completely drop the bit about SPAM, as that's not really related and doesn't have anything to do with it.)

"OpenVZ Based Kernel with OVH Powered Network hosted VPS Servers! Yes, its true!"

Did you really want to tell them that it's OVH? You're inviting them to just go to OVH and sign up there?

"Our OpenVZ virtual private servers are top notch, exceed industry standards, and are AFFORDABLE!"

(I'm not sure about that one, but that reads better.)

"Why you need a HOSTING?"

Change to:

"Why should you choose Pulchie Hosting?"

"Get More Reach!

"A business without it's existence on Internet is a business that will soon be out of business" - Bill Gates"

Change to:

"Every business, no matter how small, needs to be online!

"A business without it's existence on the Internet is a business that will soon be out of business" - Bill Gates of Microsoft"

"Powerful Security

Security? Meh, we've got it! Our partnered company "

That doesn't make a whole lot of sense as it is. Let's try to fix it a little bit.

"We exceed industry standards when it comes to security!

Our premier anti-DDoS and other security ensure your site remains online and safe from hackers! We partner with the best in the industry and we take your security very personal!"

"Market Performance

Yes, you heard it right! We do marketing too. Contact our marketing team to get a quotation."

Change to:

"Market Performance!

We want you to succeed as much as you want success. If you need help marketing and increasing awareness of your brand, contact our marketing team to get a quote!"

There!

I hope that helps? I'm a native English speaker and a writer. So, I figured I'd try to help. It will not hurt my feelings if you completely ignore this. However, I think that will make the site read better to English speakers. I didn't dig into the internal pages, as I don't really have that much initiative!

Best of luck.

[Manal]

Hello! I hope this doesn't seem impolite - it's actually me looking to do something constructive today. I'm pretty bored. I'm going to try to give you some constructive feedback, which is what you asked for.

I took a look at your site and there could be some improvements in the verbiage. Your English isn't as clear and precise as it could be. There are also some pretty basic errors.

I have a little free time today. So, I'm going to *offer* to improve your grammar. (You don't have to listen to me!)

Let's begin, shall we?

Starting at the top and working my way down (just on the front page).

"Get best speed for your website. Dont loose more clients."

Change to:

"Get the best speed for your website. Don't lose more clients."

(Loose is like a loose shoelace. Lose is what you do when you lost a client! Also, the apostrophe and "the" make it more readable.)

"Our highly clustered server with 100% SLA uptime won't get you go wrong!"

Change to:

"Our highly clustered server, with 100% SLA uptime guarantee, means you can't go wrong!"

"From automated billing to easy and user friendly based panels, we've got all for you!"

Change to:

"From automated billing to easy and user friendly control panels, we've got it all for you!"

"Got some questions? Sure! Put them up in a ticket or contact our live chat agent anytime!"

Change to:

"Have any questions? Open a support ticket or contact our live chat agent anytime."

(I'd drop the "Sure!" entirely, as it just doesn't make much sense.)

Now, the next part gets a little tricky. I'm not precisely sure what they're doing - so I am going to have to make a few assumptions.

"We're setting up our infrastructure, so dedicated servers are coming soon!"

Change to:

"We're currently experiencing growth! Dedicated servers are coming soon!"

That's a more positive statement and instills confidence in the reader.

"We just started, right? Hold on for a few more moments! Sooner you'll be able to resell our service and earn money!"

Change to:

"We're changing the dynamics of hosting! Sign up or inquire now to resell our services and start your own moneymaking business!"

Again, more positive - and it invites contact with the company. If the services aren't ready, they can at least be placed on a mailing list and be informed when the reseller services do become available.

"Highly protected anti-ddos network which doesn't oversell customers on a single server! That is, you're free from SPAM!"

"Our anti-DDoS network doesn't oversell to our customers! You get the resources you pay for!"

(I'd completely drop the bit about SPAM, as that's not really related and doesn't have anything to do with it.)

"OpenVZ Based Kernel with OVH Powered Network hosted VPS Servers! Yes, its true!"

Did you really want to tell them that it's OVH? You're inviting them to just go to OVH and sign up there?

"Our OpenVZ virtual private servers are top notch, exceed industry standards, and are AFFORDABLE!"

(I'm not sure about that one, but that reads better.)

"Why you need a HOSTING?"

Change to:

"Why should you choose Pulchie Hosting?"

"Get More Reach!

"A business without it's existence on Internet is a business that will soon be out of business" - Bill Gates"

Change to:

"Every business, no matter how small, needs to be online!

"A business without it's existence on the Internet is a business that will soon be out of business" - Bill Gates of Microsoft"

"Powerful Security

Security? Meh, we've got it! Our partnered company "

That doesn't make a whole lot of sense as it is. Let's try to fix it a little bit.

"We exceed industry standards when it comes to security!

Our premier anti-DDoS and other security ensure your site remains online and safe from hackers! We partner with the best in the industry and we take your security very personal!"

"Market Performance

Yes, you heard it right! We do marketing too. Contact our marketing team to get a quotation."

Change to:

"Market Performance!

We want you to succeed as much as you want success. If you need help marketing and increasing awareness of your brand, contact our marketing team to get a quote!"

There!

I hope that helps? I'm a native English speaker and a writer. So, I figured I'd try to help. It will not hurt my feelings if you completely ignore this. However, I think that will make the site read better to English speakers. I didn't dig into the internal pages, as I don't really have that much initiative!

Best of luck.

+REP for that.
Thank you very much for helping me out with basic things. As I already mentioned above, that client didn't pay me a single penny for website development except $36 for 3 months reseller hosting(which doesn't include web development). And yea, I made the website in just 2 hours(from setting up whmcs to making template), so it would be pretty obvious about my quality. Still, you can go and check sportswebhosting.com. The website which I have invested around 3+ hours(grammatical feedbacks would be appreciated).
Thanks again

[KGIII]

+REP for that.
Thank you very much for helping me out with basic things. As I already mentioned above, that client didn't pay me a single penny for website development except $36 for 3 months reseller hosting(which doesn't include web development). And yea, I made the website in just 2 hours(from setting up whmcs to making template), so it would be pretty obvious about my quality. Still, you can go and check sportswebhosting.com. The website which I have invested around 3+ hours(grammatical feedbacks would be appreciated).
Thanks again

LOL Why not? I'm not doing anything better this morning.

This next site is much, much better. The images at the top scroll by too fast for me to really copy and paste, but I didn't see any glaring errors. So, that's fine.

Again, starting from the top and working down.

We will skip the images that slide sideways.

"With a highly optimized cooling system, the heat generated from our metal boxes won't effect the environment! All the heat is cooled down in our room."

That's pretty rough reading.

"Our highly optimized cooling system keeps the temperatures under control and doesn't just release the heat into the atmosphere. We're helping to keep the environment safe!"

That tells them what, why, and what the benefit is.

"Easy-To-Use cPanel

Do you find it difficult to manage your website? Well, our Easy-To-Use cPanel powered service will get your work done in no time!"

Change to:

"Is your website difficult to manage? Worry no more! Our easy to use cPanel control panel will help you work efficiently and with confidence."

"Well-Tracking Analytics

Searching for a service to track your visitor's behaviour? Our built-in analytics will get you the accurate analytics for your website."

I assume that "Well-Tracking" is a typo? Change to:

"Web-tracking analytics!

Our built-in analytics will get you accurate metrics for your web sites. You can optimize your sites and improve sales by knowing where your traffic comes from and how they use your site!"

(That's the verbiage I'd use. Again, you tell them what it is and WHY it is a benefit.)

If you ever work in sales, remember this: "Features tell, benefits sell." The feature is what it does. The benefit is why it helps you. How does it make your job easier? How does it improve your life? Those sorts of things.

"We use a powerful cluster of web servers that are all interconnected to act as one giant super computer. This technology is years ahead of most other hosting companies. Combining the power of many servers creates lightning fast website speed. Not only is the service extremely fast, it is resistant to failures that effect 'single server' hosting, used by most other free and paid hosting providers. If one of our clustered servers were to fail or have a problem, your website will continue to run normally using the working servers!"

Change to:

"We use a powerful cluster of servers that are all connected, acting as one super computer. This technology is light-years ahead of the competition and far exceeds industry standard practices! By combining the power of many servers, we ensure your websites are always fast and your customers are always happy. If one server in the cluster should fail, you website remains online so that your customers can always reach you. We're proud to offer better services than other free and paid web hosting companies."

That one is a little sketchy but might work better. The initial language seemed way over the top and needlessly complicated. The potential client wants to know why it is a benefit to them. Make it simple for them to understand.

Either way, that site was significantly better than the first one! The English was much easier to read and didn't look too bad, even to a native English speaker. Good work!

[Manal]

LOL Why not? I'm not doing anything better this morning.

This next site is much, much better. The images at the top scroll by too fast for me to really copy and paste, but I didn't see any glaring errors. So, that's fine.

Again, starting from the top and working down.

We will skip the images that slide sideways.

"With a highly optimized cooling system, the heat generated from our metal boxes won't effect the environment! All the heat is cooled down in our room."

That's pretty rough reading.

"Our highly optimized cooling system keeps the temperatures under control and doesn't just release the heat into the atmosphere. We're helping to keep the environment safe!"

That tells them what, why, and what the benefit is.

"Easy-To-Use cPanel

Do you find it difficult to manage your website? Well, our Easy-To-Use cPanel powered service will get your work done in no time!"

Change to:

"Is your website difficult to manage? Worry no more! Our easy to use cPanel control panel will help you work efficiently and with confidence."

"Well-Tracking Analytics

Searching for a service to track your visitor's behaviour? Our built-in analytics will get you the accurate analytics for your website."

I assume that "Well-Tracking" is a typo? Change to:

"Web-tracking analytics!

Our built-in analytics will get you accurate metrics for your web sites. You can optimize your sites and improve sales by knowing where your traffic comes from and how they use your site!"

(That's the verbiage I'd use. Again, you tell them what it is and WHY it is a benefit.)

If you ever work in sales, remember this: "Features tell, benefits sell." The feature is what it does. The benefit is why it helps you. How does it make your job easier? How does it improve your life? Those sorts of things.

"We use a powerful cluster of web servers that are all interconnected to act as one giant super computer. This technology is years ahead of most other hosting companies. Combining the power of many servers creates lightning fast website speed. Not only is the service extremely fast, it is resistant to failures that effect 'single server' hosting, used by most other free and paid hosting providers. If one of our clustered servers were to fail or have a problem, your website will continue to run normally using the working servers!"

Change to:

"We use a powerful cluster of servers that are all connected, acting as one super computer. This technology is light-years ahead of the competition and far exceeds industry standard practices! By combining the power of many servers, we ensure your websites are always fast and your customers are always happy. If one server in the cluster should fail, you website remains online so that your customers can always reach you. We're proud to offer better services than other free and paid web hosting companies."

That one is a little sketchy but might work better. The initial language seemed way over the top and needlessly complicated. The potential client wants to know why it is a benefit to them. Make it simple for them to understand.

Either way, that site was significantly better than the first one! The English was much easier to read and didn't look too bad, even to a native English speaker. Good work!

Thank you once again! +REP for your work(once more). You really giving our suggestions like a paid freelancer would give if asked from platforms like Fiverr,etc. But you did it for FREE! Thanks once again.

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Sorry to be too much greedy. But can you please do it for shadownethost.com(cuz thats my prime focus ). If not, it's okay. You've already helped me alot.

[Littlemaster]

The design looks good, is there any terms and conditions page and privacy policy?
Also, I suggest adding more options like network tools.

[KGIII]

Thank you once again! +REP for your work(once more). You really giving our suggestions like a paid freelancer would give if asked from platforms like Fiverr,etc. But you did it for FREE! Thanks once again.

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Sorry to be too much greedy. But can you please do it for shadownethost.com(cuz thats my prime focus ). If not, it's okay. You've already helped me alot.

Once again, and starting from the top!

You get extra marks for the immediacy of your response time to the chat. It said you were offline and I'm not sure if that's intentional, but your response time was fantastic.

Moving on...

See this image:

http://pix.toile-libre.org/upload/origin...254357.png

Firefox, latest version, OS is Linux. I have no idea what that is supposed to be, but it's an error in my view. So, you may wish to fix that. Seeing a glaring error like that is an immediate turnoff. It makes me doubt the professionalism of the company.

Moving on...

"Best Virtual Service
Web & WordPress Hosting"

Consider changing to:

"Best Virtual Serivces;
Including Web and WordPress hosting!"

Moving on...

See this image:

http://pix.toile-libre.org/upload/origin...254675.png

Again, there's that "unknown character" or faulty image. That's seemingly an error. If it isn't an error then, to be honest, it's a horrible design choice! I'm going to assume it's an error, because your design is pretty good.

(You said this site was your focus, so I'm going to be extra rough/careful with this one. I am going to be picky!)

"Free Domain on Yearly plan"

Change to:

"Free domain name with yearly plan!"

Add exclamation points to the rest of those four items. They are benefits.

In that same section...

"Awesome customer support"

The word "awesome" is a bad choice. You want professionalism.

"Industry leading customer support!"

Moving on...

"Our web hosting plans with wordpress hosting available includes easy setup, automated updates and backups, 100%
network uptime with a very high bandwidth limitations which will never end and 24/7 email/ticket support. Use any
WordPress theme or plugin you want. Starting at $2.95/mo"

You're going to try to avoid using exact same phrases - UNLESS you want them to stand out. You also don't want to use "limitations." That's a negative. Avoid that.

"Our generous hosting plans come with easy setup, easy configuration, and include point-and-click WordPress! With our hosting, you can use any WordPress theme or plugins! Our 100% uptime, with exceptional bandwidth allocations will ensure your business is available at all times and from all locations across the globe. Our knowledgeable staff is available to help you 24 hours a day. You can contact us by email, ticket system, and even with chat!"

That looks better to my eyes and it gets rid of that word "limitations." You never imply limits as anything but a benefit. It's a negative word.

Also never, ever use the word "cheap." Never use it. Instead, it's "inexpensive" or "affordable." Use anything but "cheap."

(Not that you did, but that it's a good solid piece of sales advice and other people may be reading this.)

Next...

Your package names... They are all metals until you get to "enterprise." Those things don't go together.

Maybe something like Bronze, Silver, Gold, Platinum? That's up to you, but I'd seriously recommend making the four items at least have the same subject/connotations. Going from three metals to "enterprise" just looks like you didn't give it much thought.

Next...

"Planning to start a web hosting company? Well, our plans are best for you! With top-notch uptime, you can't
go wrong! Now with Free Unlimited SSL Certificates! Starting at $4.5/mo"

"Would you like to earn money reselling web hosting? Our reseller plans are the best in the business. With our uptime and round-the-clock support, you can't go wrong? We'll even throw in unlimited SSL Certificates and our plans start at only $4.50 per month!"

You also have 100% in there - and 99.99% later. I'd say leave the first one vague (as all hosting companies offer similar - even if they don't provide it.

(Also... It's up to you, if you want to use $4.5 - but it's traditional in most English speaking countries to include the extra decimal point. So, I wrote it as $4.50. You also used $4.50 elsewhere, and being consistent is a good idea.)

Alright...

We gotta talk about those names for your reseller accounts.

Little Boy and Fat Man? Those are the names of the atom bombs that the US dropped on Japan near the end of World War II. That's a horrible idea! LOL No! You almost certainly want to change those!

How about something like:

Starter Plan, Medium Plan, Large Plan, Enterprise Plan

Those aren't bad, but I highly, highly recommend changing the existing titles!

Next...

"Affordable pricing for you

We have powerful products which can help you for managing your digital services.
Start your journey by selecting one of our products and get promising and secure system for
your digital products and services."

Change to:

"AFFORDABLE PRICING!

We have premier products that can assist you in managing all of your digital services. Start your business upgrade by selecting one of our packages and get started on the road to digital success! We take service and support as seriously as you do."

Again, I had to change the verbiage, but the intent is expressed a bit better. You're capitalizing on their emotions at that point. You're saying you take their customers as seriously as they take their customers.

Next!

"With our clustered network around the world, you can't go wrong."

Maybe try rewording that?

"With our clustered, world-wide, network of servers, you can't go wrong."

Next!

"Our load balanced network will never disappoint you. If one server fails, another will take place."

Maybe:

"Our load-balanced network will not disappoint. If one server fails, another takes its place - keeping your business online and ready when your customers need you."

Next...

"From creation of website, to website builder and from database to website scanner, we have everything you need."

That's kind of gibberish.

"From creation of a website with a free website builder, to all the databases your company needs, we cover all your business needs."

Next...

"You can monitor your website will our easy-to-monitor logs system. Form 400 to 1000, all errors are logged when accessed."

Change to:

"You can monitor your services with our easy to use logging system. Know when errors happen and know how to fix them."

Next...

"With our softaculous support, you can install any of the most popular or the least applications easily with just one click!"

"With Softaculous, you can instantly install any of the most popular applications, keep backups, and automatically update them to ensure you have the latest features and the best available security."

I took some artistic leeway with that one.

Next...

"Our DDoS protected, highly secured network will not let you get your website hacked in any manner. Our server firewall is always online!"

"Our highly secured network will keep you safe from hacking. Our server's firewalls are always online and protecting you from DDoS and other attacks."

"Use the coupon "NEW10" to avail your 10% discount on any of Shared Hosting.
Get super speed for your website. Get started from $2.95/mo."

Hmm...

"Use coupon code "NEW10" to get 10% off any shared hosting plan. Get started for just $2.95 per month!"

I'd drop most of that last line entirely. It just reads awkwardly.

Finally!!!

"We have powerful products which can help you for managing your digital services. Start your journey by selecting
one of our products and get promising and secure system for your digital products and services."

That's a little tougher.

"We have a powerful infrastructure that helps you manage all your digital needs. Your first step to business success is selecting the package that best suits your needs. You can rely on our promises and security to ensure your business growth and reputation."

I like that better and it says the same thing, but it emphasizes the benefit. You are telling them WHY they should choose you. How those features will benefit them is important. It's not just a list of features - it's "Why do I even care about these features?"

It's also important to remember that not all customers are going to be technologically minded, so make sure that they know what the jargon does for them.

Anyhow, I'd start there!

Also, this one took a while. So, I'm done with this for now! If you have other sites, they'll have to wait for another day.